I'm only not replying to everyone's peices because I'm a shameful lazy bastard. I dunno what everyone's elses excuses are.

This was an interesting peice. Not sure how else to put. It seemed to ramble on from one thing to another, but it did so with some creativity. I liked how it played on certain words and things.

I am matter and matter exists
but matter is also shit//
So what does it matter
if I just get madder//
Am I shit or is shit me
I have shit, is shit reality?//

That was my favorite part.

Overall these was well... interesting. It doesn't look like it would flow, but it does. The rhymes aren't too complex, but aint simple either. And it really does cause the mind to think of things reading it. So it was pretty damn good.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.