I dunno why... but I get this odd feeling you're some sorta Tupac fan. I think, I just get that vibe. Maybe I'm psychic?

Ooohkay, as for you peice. Hm... Not sure what kind of monster you mutated into. I'm imagining a green mud monster locked in a prison cell of some sort, but that's just my imagination.

The first verse was the best, and the worse. It was the best because it had so much pain described in it, but I didn't have any idea of where it was going. And the second verse, it gave me an idea of where you were going in what you were writing, but I didn't feel it went any where. But there were emotions, and a backstory, and that's what really showed through on this peice.

~Irenic~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.