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Old 01-05-04, 12:14 AM   #13
Brendan
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This was a good verse with some very true shit. I like the idea and I like the delivery.

Only thing I would suggest is to maybe work on your flow a little bit... it seems a little choppy in parts, at least when I'm rapping it in my head.
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