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A Life Made Up Of Wants
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01-05-04, 12:14 AM
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Brendan
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This was a good verse with some very true shit. I like the idea and I like the delivery.
Only thing I would suggest is to maybe work on your flow a little bit... it seems a little choppy in parts, at least when I'm rapping it in my head.
Brendan