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Property isn't building blocks it doesnt create happiness
I'm glad I learned something from life and my acomplises
Word............
I like your flow, structure was good, but some lines could have been worded better...
I mean, certain words will kill your flow, don't sacrafice the flow for vocabulary....becuase if the words mean the same shit, use what works better not whats bigger.
I'll have a peice up soon, check it out
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