Rule-

Property isn't building blocks it doesnt create happiness
I'm glad I learned something from life and my acomplises

Word............

I like your flow, structure was good, but some lines could have been worded better...

I mean, certain words will kill your flow, don't sacrafice the flow for vocabulary....becuase if the words mean the same shit, use what works better not whats bigger.



I'll have a peice up soon, check it out