yea this wasn't bad..it was ur first cypher so that's good...u'll get better over time if u cypher alot...I got pretty good at rhyming in cyphers...seems like that's really what u should work on..other kat was pretty good, he seemed more experienced but he wasn't great either....u both could use elevation but it wasn't bad at all...

peace

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