yea man this was a long piece but I felt it...nice story tellin track...simple flow that was easy to catch..had some nice rhymes in it...like the way u rhymed "holy grail" and "old and frail" I never thought of that...

pretty tite drop..I'm too sleepy to give a longer crit tho..u maybe coulda used more vocabulary in certain parts...but I'm just trying to find things to complain about now...not many multis I guess..but who fuckin cares u had good rhymes..lol

peace

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