Pretty much everything that L.A.STR~E~TZ said. He knows what he's talking about.

Not J Mindz though. I've never met him, but I can tell from his post in this thread that he is an idiot who knows not what he speaks of. What I mean by that is, I'm sure J Mindz is a great guy and all. But so is this forum. And it's rather uncalled for to insult it. But, with ego checked at door, I'm sure he's a good guy and I'd easily get along with him. As long as he obeys the rules, he's certainly welcome here.

Now, as for what I want to say to you BooChine. I encourage you to stay here in rb.com's poetric scriptures. It's a pretty decent place, and the experience is rather enjoyable. But please stop writing in caps.

As for your poetry, we've all written poems like that. Simple ones and such. The thing is, we've all elevated to some degree over time. You will, if you keep at it, elevate as well. And you will become a much better poet. Keep what L.A.STR~E~TZ said in mind, because while it wasn't very nice it was still true. But poetry is of course, subjectful, and things change.

Either way, as long as you reply with feedback on other's people's peices, you are welcome all the same here. And, with ego checked at door, you'll find this is a wonderful place at many times.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.