Pretty much what Deva said. I didn't even notice those "Holy grail" and "Old and frail" rhymes. And it was long.

But damn... it's cause I got caught up in it. You told a story there, and I gotta say to hold my attention says a lot. Much respect for that. And yeah, the peice seemed a bit simple with the short lines and stuff, but there was more to it. More, at least, than I noticed.

~Islam~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.