goddamn, psycology to a new level. this piece is stunning in its sheer power to make the reader, well, read. after i read this i cannot believe wat i read, i had to read it 2 times to try and understand, but i didnt bother to go down to the paragraph becouse i was too stubborn and thought it might have been a spoiler of sum sort. back to the poem, i liked it alot mostly because of the level of new material. i mean, im sure no poem like this has been done on this site and u bring a new level to these forums with such great work. i too understand both prespectives, and being able to understand the fathers prespective makes me feel both guilty and strange. i guess its just that u wrote it in a way that the reader could understand it. the part of the father scares the shit outa me personally becouse the imagery is so good that i can see a dark basement, a scared daughter, a crazed white man, and a horrible seen of rape. simply put this poem is breathtaking.

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