Not sure I should interrupt what seems to be a 'private moment'.. but pfft, I will anyway because I want to tell you this is beautifully written. Using the thunder and rain, and writing them synonymous with the argument you had, your life, your tears, is just stunning. I breezed through the entire piece, didnt hit one speedbump in the flow. The rhyming wasnt forced at all, it seemed natural the entire way through. Effortless even.

Most times, its when we are emotionally messed up that the best 'stuff' just pours out... I know thats where my muse works its creative magic on me, when I am at my lowest.. which unfortunately means that when Im happy I cant write (which drives me crazy) so I look for.. err.. certain substances that will provide what I describe as 'simulated depression' haha.
Anyway enough dribble from me..

Beautiful write. Hope everything worked out

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