Veteran
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IP:
Very dope read...
A bit too much self-pity kicking in here.
Why so depressed?
Just smoke a bowl.
Get laid.
Beat the shit outta someone.
Anyway...
Great flow, great wordplay, and real nice emotion.
Nice upwards twist at the end...
I was expecting you to break down crying, glad you didn't.
8/10
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