I've been contemplating what to say about your poem for the past 3 hours. That's how strongly it effected me, bro. Holy shit, when I first started reading it, I hadn't heard true poetry in so long, I almost thought you were talking about you're daughter, like I thought that you were doing that shit to her, and I almost flipped out. My girl thinks it's sick, but I thought it was amazing. Almost remenant of Jim Morrison's dark style of poetry. Hit me back up, I defenitly wanna hear more.