okay you guys are mad that your battles are getting sleped on.. now im a vote on this shit but if i dont get my battles voted on im never going to vote on yalls battles again
Aiight im a break it down line for line
CAsualities verse
Profit huh? Should have seen this come’n
Well? I see in your future a scared bitch runnin
I'll have you witnessing you own death like you swapped brains with Cleo(Tells the future)
with rhymes this lethal casualty will always remain unequalled
Aight disses nothing special
You spit rhymes with lines that make P. Diddy crap shine
I could spit with no punches and you still couldnt touch mines
Hitting profit like a hallucination, its time you start facin
you couldnt be blazin if your rhymes were watched like star gazing
Pretty weak wordplay you can step up your wordplay a little better next time
I've mastered these forces, I smash you and leave you nauseous
fuck spittin heat, I spit flames like I'm equipped with torches
Nice wordplay
I split wigs with axes, knockin you off your axis
with cannons blasting, proven anti-passive you'll be leaving in a casket
Overall: this verse aint have anyting that really had me saying ooh or ahh.. you could have used better more creative punchlines in this battle.. your verse was pretty much basic man.. the only punchlines i saw that you had was that shit bout cleo
pretty basic verse.. ill give that shit a 4.5/10
Other verse
look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/
Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/
Sorry this was a weak opener to a verse.. plus win and postin dont even rhyme
Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/
Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/
Pure weakness man shits played
But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/
leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/
Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/
no disses in these lines man
like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/
Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/
including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/
Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/ his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/
Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/
best part of the verse nice personal disses
Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/
Overall played verse some lines aint even rhyme
VOTE: im voting for casuality on this one he had a little better wordplay.. both of yall could elevate alot
i spent time voting on your battle.. so do the same hit up these 2 battles i got going
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=103902
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103517