CarsonJet--
This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token?
We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record
Ok..nice concept..original..Ok opener
This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look
Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's
Basic concept..'played'..cud've done more with this..
Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook
Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book
Screw the similie..nice personal..
He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong
Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs
Again cud've done more with it, Ok punch.
Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more"
hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor
[B]..Nice..good closer.. nothin great but still.

[B]Overall: Good verse..some nice, simple wordplay.
Nice work on the personals.. work on creativity though..
Sometimes in there..i've seen before.

Reflektionz--
If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know..
Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio..
Cud use a little rewordin.. but still nice..ok opener
because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be ..
so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key ..
No real punch here..lame concept..average filler here
come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense..
i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets ..
Good lines..cud up the flow but none the less..nice
spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him ..
but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym ..
Could be..but isnt.
now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do ..
that's to take them back from me just to help you improve ..
Again filler..its all in wrists to! lol..
often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again?
because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then ..
Muah.. ok,ok.. add more complexity
only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes.
if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post..
Would be good, if it wasnt for the fact..he has already posted

Overall: Ok drop, you need to work on wordplay, meta's & what not.. just add more overall complexity.
Also ur verse included to much filler n not enough personals.

Vote: CarsonJet