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Old 01-05-04, 02:26 PM   #12
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aiight i got yall on the votes

yall might want to do more that 3 bars next time cuz the new line limit is 10 lines

Mike DREW- dude your pretty nice man.. lol.. you had some funny ass punchlines like

"give it up son i heard wackness inc. is look'n for for profound secretaries/
in this battle ima have u lay'n with ya face in the groundl like upside down cemetaries//"

your whole verse was pretty tight man ill give you a 7/10 shit was pretty good for a newbie man

JAB- i know this was supposed to only be a 3 bar battle but you could have come alot harder dude.. you had some pretty basic rhymes dog.. improve more

vote- i vote for mike drew he had better punchlines and better wordplay than jab plus he used nice personal disses
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