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Old 01-05-04, 02:31 PM   #9
Born To Kill
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Thesis killed this battle...

Or should I say, Chrit killed this battle

Better everything, wordplay, punches, wit and humor.

Bad structure, weak punches...
At least there was a mild attempt at wordplay towards the end.
But it needed alot more of it.
And better of it as well.

No beef. Just saying it how it is.

Fuckin Chrit...
Always comin back...
Even fucked up and used your italics in ya first verse...
Wow...I wonder who it could be!?!?!
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