This is what i thought and all the votes against the propohet were very laid out and nice...But there wrong...Cuz i know whats a good flow...anyhow heres my opinion....

look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/
Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/
Ok this was very well good for the start...Rhymes also.
Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/
Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/
lame....thats all im saying
But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/
leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/
Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/
like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/
Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/
including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/
Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/ his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/
Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/
Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/

But yeah..............Ill end the fix up up....shit....forgot something