Im trying a Odd Style trying to get more versa

1st Things 1st Dog i aint hatin "n" Shit/
Da names takin....n u just lost 2 Quip/
Thats 2 things K.... needs 2 FIX/
"O YEH STOP SNORTING PIXIE STICKS!!//
Your flows are trash asshole... u should stop/
or i"ll will treat u like a bum and throw u in a box//
my bad for another change of subject/
i get more pussy then u "n" i cant enter clubs yet/
your just a faggot for hire//
i should strangle u can see can u rap through the wire//

Aight thats 10 man i had so much shit i probly lost but im just expermenting but if i beat u with this vs u need 2 stop