Blak Woods
Battlin someone like Born, You should know better..
I know you havent texted in a while...But this was,
exceptionally simplistic..a little to, for my taste.
And if that wasnt enough you hardly packed punches,
Let alone..personals.
You had some minor concepts..but didnt worked them..
..Out well.. you should n could have done better.
Overall below average..

Born to Kill
Basically you did what you had to do..
Nothin flashy or real complex..kept it fairly simple..
But you came with the nessacery punches.
The lines around Cali worked well n connected,
Well to that 'fireplace' line..nice punch.
Overall u just edged it with better punches..
& every other catagory basically.
Overall Good. One sided.

Vote: Born To Kill