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Old 01-05-04, 04:10 PM   #13
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nice battle by both im lookin at this battle as if yall were battling each other on stage of whatever

ill break it down line for line
BLAK WOODS VERSE
who tha hell do you think you was born ta kill//
try murderin yaself fa thinking you was born wit skill//
you a bore fa real//
you wastin ya time, you get took out from da neck//
be thankful you just gettin blessed wit text//

yo shits aiight man.. kinda basic but looks like you were concerned with talkin shit rather than commin up with punchlines talkin shit

huston tex... theres a problem wit that//
too many wanna be rappers, that's just fake and wack//
it's obivious to me that you conceal your gay//
and you a headhunta nigga, huh... anyway//
you just keep foolin ya'self cause we all see through you//
and you too can see that ya lyrics are "doo doo"//

pretty elementary.. but i wont hold it against you seeign that you just talkin shit to the nigga

are you sure that this is the career you want to choose//
get beat, battered, and bruised//
I'll thump thump thump (B2K) that ass, shake ya shit real loose//
yo man this verse was ok.. noting special it wasnt bad but it was aiight man ill give you a 4.5/10 on that one

born to kills verse

He's from the hottest part in Cali, but spittin poor sound...
Forced ta live tha street life, cuz his fuckin house burned down.
lol funny shit.. nice use of current events to form a diss

It's that way with Cali, always fires for acres or mudslides...
Alot like Blak's rhymes, disasters from which ya wanna hide.
I shouldn't even be doing this, he's nothing to me, no good...
But my fireplace is empty, so I'll chainsaw tha Blak Woods.
pretty decent

He can keep me warm, on these cold winter nights, how nice...
Now shut the fuck up and burn, think again, it'll happen twice.
So you won't want a rematch, your merking will be outstanding...
Cuz everyone else is in rap, while ya entry is still in tha planning.
Nah, scrap that, those plans have been laid to waste, like you...
Cold lounging in a dumpster, ya got sleepy while looking for food.
So lemme end this by dwelling, not on ya life but ya rhyme skill...
Everyone knows it, but I'll put it in print...It sucks and always will.


this shit was kind of elementary.. also your wordplay was nothing special shit was pretty basic actually


vote: i got to give this battle to blak woods.. this battle was sort of close.. however the shit that set it apart for me was that blak woods verse seemed like he was going more at born to kill.. born to kill alot of your verse seemed like you were talkin to blak woods in the second person.. theres nothing really wrong with that its just that blak woods verse seemed more like it was directed at you harder
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