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Dis battle was very Funny was feelin

verse cuz of the structure and how his shyt was on point.....buttt

ReaSonz:

1.

I was Feeling this Line Right here:

Quote:

i got a UNIQUE GAME while you STAY FAKIN
your like raps version of CLAY AIKEN
the chances of you gettin signed is like that of eminem makin a deal with a GAY STATION

^^^^ Dat was Funny....the whole Eminem thing....if u had worded it a lil Shorter it woulda Came out betta but it was good!

2. Dis Line right here....Just FuCked up errthing from My Point of view

Quote:

you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW
cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS
your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS
/QUOTE]

I dUNNO......IT JUST DIDNT SUM UP 2 ME....

BUT I GIVE YA sHYT AN OVERALL 7/10

Now Street Fame

Ya Style is hella diff..so i had 2 look at ya shyt from a diff perspective..

the lines i found good in ya shyt was

1.[QUOTE]And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!..
Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch...

lol^^^^^ Dat Ish was funny....hehe

2.Another Line tha was str8 was:

Quote:

So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face!!..

dat was funni^^^

But then i kinda got lost in ya shyt like 4 instance

[QUOTE][You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good...
And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'..
/QUOTE]

Scrating in the hood??? u lost me there.....i get the scratching....but where the hell does IN THE HOOD come from????

hmmmm Overall 8/10

well my vote goes 2

Vote: StreetFame