Well the both of you have got a little elevating to do...

I give the battle to Anubis... it's true, you did have some problems with your structure and some of your punches didn't land but you were the most effective overall.. try making all of yourl ines a punch of some sort and stay away from the hypothetical situations...make it seem like that is the way it is and not how it should/could be.

Blessed you had a decent drop as well but you really need to work on beefing up the punches. Work on the multi's too, make em flow easier. You had some good lines but your verse had too much filler and your punches that did hit did so softly...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997

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