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Old 01-05-04, 05:32 PM   #5
Born To Kill
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Man...

This was a helluva nice battle...

Really, really, really whack opening by Brendan...

I didn't need all that clutter.

Then came the verse...

It could have spoken for itself.

Great wordplay, real hard and funny punches.
Flow was on point.
The "Miss Piggie" line made me laugh outloud.

The first 4 lines were whack and weak as hell for some reason...

But then the rest smoked the flaming bird.

Phoenix came back hard, but didn't have the punches...
Real nice wordplay, real good humor ("fat bitch/twister" LOL)
But it was the punches that fell short.

Simply not as hard as Brendan's.

Peace
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