That was beautiful man...sad though.
I'm assuming this was written with her in mind.
You should really let her read this, or sing in for her. Get the guitar, do a little soft background music and sing away. I'm telling you, do it! Go Go Go! If your still reading this Edi I am so going to beat you, go, grab the guitar, go sing. It's sure to win her back. Do iiiiiiit!