the words used are pretty simple, but the structure you have put the word in, makes the piece pretty special. This piece was like one of the poems i had to do in my GCSE exam, i tried to take the open mic exam, but they dont have that???? dicks???
its an open mic, but its quite poetic!!

there is nothin that is bad about the piece apart from the fact i didnt write it!!! but it is flawless, to my herbish knowledge!!

if only your computer liked you, an you could do audio on their, you would probabaly get heard of in your local canadian club!!!!


an ill pice, awesome immagery!!!
you have a lot of talent!!

peace