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Flyweight
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IP:
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Ive got an open mind 24/7//
You shouldnt battle anymore just give up//
Like your momma said its better safe than sorry//
I took her advice, I wore a condom when I fucked her//
I felt for her, she dont need another son like you//
When you came out the world was in shock//
The worlds ugliest baby, so tha doc slapped ya mom//
Go crawl back under ya stone before ya get stepped on//
Im gonna smoke you like I would canibus//
Just Get out of here, heres some coin go catch the bus//
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Adagio.... The best advice I could give you would be: Learn how to rhyme.
Only your last 4 lines rhymes..... That's all I'm gonna say
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Ok, the only way you'd possibly win, is if people read my verse, and mistake is for yours,
How can you fuck, when your dick is as big as apostrophed words?
I'm harrasing this bitch, like he was a woman working in the office,
Accomplih literacy dude, before you attack with that nonsense,
Like Jennifer Lopez, I can still beat you with half-assed,
I could speak fucking gibberish, and you still couldn't match that,
You're shitty like a trash-bag, I'm still on the wonder,
How you could beat anybody, your verse needs a plunger,
And just to crush you I'm go out with a bang, shut your eyelids,
Oddjob faggot, get a hobby, and a lolly-pop, so then I can kill you like a virus.
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Brethren, you rhymed, so that's a plus. work on your punches, man, they ain't hittin. Try and work some personals into your verse next time.... Good job though
Vote: Brethren. Overall better verse. |