This was a pretty dope piece fgee ... I was feelin' it from start to finish ... Imagery was dope ... The meanings within' your lines were dope ... Content was nice ... Flow was a lil' choppy at one point ... But was still easy to follow ... I liked the rhyme scheme U used ... Dope piece overall

The ink well's dried up and with it my expression
And as I walk past I kick the full bucket of depression

Perhaps I lost respect and a perspective of my inner thoughts
I forgot that paper and pen merge willingly, they need not be taught

Those lines hit me the most while readin' this piece ... They were dope ... A lot of meanin' in them ... Especially the first two I quoted I loved those lines ... Keep doin' ur thing man ... This was a dope drop keep em comin' ... Peace