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Old 01-05-04, 07:35 PM   #9
Soulfire
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This battle was good, but...

Ocanti: Your verse was good, but I didn't really feel your story this time. You needed to say some stuff that hit home harder, cause your punches weren't that effective. Oh and when you talk about the both of you in your verse, it kinda weakens it. But everything else in your verse was pretty good.

Doc Knock: Your verse was good. I liked the way you attacked her lines and made them your own metas. Punches coulda been a little more effective, but you had decent wordplay.

Vote: Doc Knock