^ Thank you very much for your useful feedback. As for the line in question,
Quote:
A global whistle, composed of missiles exists in the focal ring
Of journalists & attention-seekers with their lips on its opening
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By global whistle, I mean the opportunity for anybody & everybody to get their hands on attention by the simple blow of a proverbial whistle. Hence the title of attention-seeking media hounds: "whistle-blowers." As for the meaning of a "focal ring," I really should have put a few periods after that line to make sure that the reader knew I meant a focal ring of journalists, etc. In essence, a "focal ring" is an important/heralded group.
Admittedly, "focal ring" wasn't the best choice of words
I'm glad that somebody mentions my mistakes, & reiterate that I'm thankful for the reply. Peace