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IP:
hmmm..interesting concept..dont' see many songs about the news unless the guy making the song was in the news for something...
for the concept I give you an 7.5....b/c it is a kind of overdone concept...I mean it's original, but you played it out in that song...u made it sound more important than it really is...
ur rhymescheme and flow was nice....your multis didn't exist tho
you could have used more wordplay...
decent overall though
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