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Old 01-05-04, 10:38 PM   #11
PaDDyMaN
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stocks is buildin/
quip cant stop the killin/
3/10 it rhymes nigga but whos it aimed at?
i could wait, stop and eat,/
and get enoguh for j-cochrin/
3/10 the fuck u talkin about?
beefin....you need more gaurds then baywatch/
and i hate cops/
2/10 you hate cops, good for u man
so heat...i keep it under the mat/
keep mouthin/ il have ya crew commin deep in black/
4/10 your BEST line
take "C'' ....yea i pull um when its beef/
and i could understand why ur funeral is deep/
3/10
fuck it...rearrange that/
got the spliff....extra clips....got bring them thangs back/
extra clips, u bitin off Biggie freestyles now 3/10
i slang crack....spend 4....8 is what i brang back/
and u know that this hata' knows his games whack/
3/10 his game is WHACK what a broad overused statement
and un-cut yall....WHO WANT WHAT//....im out....1
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the only positive to that verse is that it was a genuine freestyle, if it wasn't and you sat around thinking that up, then dont ever come back to this site.
C_quip had less lines and STILL had more points nigga, u need to elevate, think of more punches for ur freestyles, look at EM he freestyles AND has punches in the mix so its not just a buncha words that rhymes
VOTE C QUIP
Repay the favor kids when u see my shit in the forum
Ayo I Decapitate-Hoe, Then Irraticate-Flows With Scripts That Incinagrate Pro's
I Just Fasinate-At-Shows, While You Stay On The Net Downloading My Shows Uno?
4/10
I'll Whip Out The Flow - Then Rip-On-The Go, Sip On The Low And Blaze You're Crew
You Getting Before A Fucken V..Theirs No Way You Avioding Me Tearing You
5/10 WOW AN ATTACK! FIRST OF THE BATTLE!
I'm Fearing Who? - Yah Just A Net Worm..Go Jump In Between Two Cars
I Blast At Bars, Kill Then Scar..This Line'll Get It's Point Across Yah Fucken Avatar
6/10
You Suffer From Sars - I've Heard This Weak Kid Spit..His Voice Sounds More Bitch Then Dolphins
Loading And Locking, Roll And Rocking..Got My Fist In His Throat..A Real Nail In The Coughin
6/10 the dolphin line was cool but not that other "stuff"
My Verse Is Too Shocking - So Just Elevate Or Pull Up..Better Yet Top-Pull
You're Less Then..While I Stay Greater Than Like The Letter 'V' Horizontal
7/10 cool closer but what the hell is TOP-PULL?
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