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Old 01-05-04, 11:17 PM   #14
idyLLic
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Home Grown- spit/chew line was the only decent line of the battle, bad structure n' weak rhyming...keep ur head up and stick with it though...

Poseidon- Good bar structure, had points of complexity throughout the rhyme, had some meta'z going...wasn't the best work, but got the job done...

Conclusion- Poseidon had a better overall verse, better wordplay, punches, structuring, the whole deal...

Vote=Poseidon