kinda nice piece..nothin special at all, an average attempt at a slightly above average topic...i won't lie ..it's not great..but it's not bad...coulda put more thought into it once you had your concept..it seems liek you jus spent a few minutes on it...keep writin skiddz
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"..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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