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Flyweight
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IP:
my vote down
Bombz
Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air,
You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break,
Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age',
U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit,
Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits,
Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments,
For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense,
You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent,
good wordplay good vocab and strieght pounchs
overall a very good verse but you could have came on harder
-----no hate jus a vote---
Eki
Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with with swords
I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong
he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong
Insane Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine
............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn.....................
Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom,
............dates back to your childhood..............
ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room
your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass,
your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy)
better overall verse with better and stronger pounches and personals really got me laughing
better wordplay
overall vote ---------Eki----------
no hate jus an honest vote
vote my battle in sig
tight battle you had
peace
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