168: I liked what you were trying to say as an opener but you kind of halfway did it. Your closer was off the hook. The body of your verse was sloppily put together I really did'nt see the connection. Maybe in your case I would have to hear you rap it, but besides that I just seen the body as an outline for a speech kinda thing. The last three lines were your hotest.

Hotbarz: Opener was hot, I really did'nt feel your middle to much either except for the avatar part it assured it was freestyle and a personal was'nt the best or really good or anything but it maintained. It flowed a lot better. Not an original closing but it fit.

Overall 168's structure messed it up for me....I belive he/she forced a lot of the words into the verse that were'nt needed.

My vote : HotBarz because it flowed a lot better,,,,,I mean a lot better