its not that i dont believe its your verse, its just those last to lines that made me kinda start thinking..why would he say that...and when said make this quike i didnt mean you had 20min to write a verse..sorry for all the confusion. anyways good verse, dont worry i wouldnt DQ you.. i wouldn't unless i was 100% sure, in this case i wasnt..

Upping #1.. to get honest votes... ........................