I already told ya my opinion, since i know you in real life i thought your voice would be a little bit deeper that it sounds on the track it does sound really young.
Good track it'll be good to see the final product, and the guy who said about the accent... Don't forgot Chris we are Aussi's lol...

Keep writing and recording man, cause i know how much potential you got in ya cause you ahve so much modivation an dedication. Not like msot people (eg. me) who can't be fucked after 3 weeks...

pce