iight..not a bad battle but heres how it is
BREAKDOWN--
punches-Verse
flow-verse
structure-verse
origanality-kinda both
complexity-verse
sustainment-verse
enjoyment-both
metas-verse
overall-verse

Was one-sided but Verse ya gotta start throwin
harsh personals coz u can only use so much metas
ya verse was aight and all but ya need peeps to go
ooh and ahh at the punches if ya gonna beat some
good peeps on the site.. now that ya got ya wins up
start to battle some good competition pz...

other kid..you had the rite idea but jus stop using //
at the end of ya lines n start thinkin bout ya punches

Props to both pz

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