word up..so to speak
another koalatee piece
agree with the message hundred percent too..
the metaphor of the whistle and its use thru out the piece helped me to grasp your views
your word choice was of high standards again and vocab not lacking..
flow was there as well..
i found the way u wrote it informative too cos if i didnt understand one line i did after the next one..
cant quote...cos theres a few lines i could..
props again
check mine out if you will