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Old 01-06-04, 12:31 PM   #4
Dev
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thought ya flow started to really getting going, but then would stop and start again...probably cos the transistion to the next ryhme wasn't smoothe enough...also the syllables, could be evened out a bit to help it..... but other than that i liked it... scheme was good for most.... vocab went well.... yeah decent drop....pZ..
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