Start replying to other open mics or yours will get closed, Thanks.
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Iv become rappin with my flows helped by Masta C
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^I dont remember helping you but oh well lol
But this was ok....your structure in this was alright, it could use some work on some lines though, some of them were kinda stretched out, just watch that stuff....you had some good vocab through out this....try adding some multies to make this better...but overall this was alright..keep at it.