heh....your structure with this needs work...or this could have been something very good....(pm me if you have questions by the way)...i understoood the wordplay that you used...but some of the words that you incorperated into your sentences didn't flow so well...the imagery that went with this was well thought out...but you lacked some pictures here and there

igido...

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S