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Old 01-06-04, 03:31 PM   #8
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this battle was so one sided its not even funny.. kayne destroyed problem c

PROBLEM C- your verse really didnt have any hard disses or punchlines that stood out.. and you really had weak wordplay like lines like this "your just a faggot for hire//
i should strangle u can see can u rap through the wire//"

you could do a lot better than that


KAYNE- you took this battle easily with personal disses and a nice use of multies.. the only problem with your verse was that some of your lines were stretched i dont hold flow against someone that much on text battles.. cuz you could probably flow that.. but next time.. try and reduced your lines

VOTE:KAYNE
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