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Old 01-06-04, 04:54 PM   #22
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
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Center- come out pretty strong but I didnt think the puches were all there
"knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold
cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control"
Good line but no punch
"theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor
cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer"
Very weak closer
I liked your opener tho


ILL-Came strong flow was off at times kinda like you forced it a little tryin to add to much shit in ya verse makes it sound a little cluttered. You had some dope punches and multis tho

Your opener funny and was strong I liked it
You stayed strong threwout and your verse was pretty damn funny



OVERALL- ILL
He had better punches
Center's were a little weak
But a good battle none the less



Even tho I cant poll vote I still took some time to give feed back an up this post so do me the favor of voting on my shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104380

An this one has been slept on bad

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103568

Thanks