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Old 01-06-04, 05:04 PM   #18
LyricalJedi
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My vote on this thing
Punches: Smiley "dude your WACK AS SHIT, your IQ is kinda like the equivalence of a STACK AH BRICKS" That line was very nice and To-Face did not have any punches that strong.

Open: Smiley got him on this department because to face was very simple and dull but smiley just came in sharp.

Metaphors: I saw none really I could not nobody really painted a picture for me.

Structure: Smiley hey to-face put somemore effort dog

Close: Smiley got him

Winner: Smiley