listen up, multiz don't count if ya rhymes pathetic,
sweat-it, the technique couldn't get any better,
my rhymes stone cold, you light as a feather,
sometimes yo rhymes make me wanna question
ya gender, cause deciple peep this recital desses,
ya 3r style, reduce, reuse, recycle,
its like tribal like, waves and titals goin homicidal
on this wanna be rap idol, pro? you dont deserve that tittle
this beef messgae is final, come on with best punches
evn the weakest MC could drive you suicidal.
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yo you need some elavation...
punches were weak...
personals where ok barely...
flow/ok
style/nope
meta/nope
multi/barely but weak...
overall/a 4 out of 10...4/10...
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lol.. lets have a little bit of fun with this

I'll GRAB AH STICK, shatter and CRACK YA RIBS
dude your WACK AS SHIT, your IQ is kinda like the equivalence of a STACK AH BRICKS
you've got a LACK AH WITTS, shit even SLAYED CORNS DISS YOU
seen your pic and you bout look perfect for centerfolds of GAY PORN ISSUES
dude you've got a love for anal PENETRATION ,SERIOUS
you claim your a "blood" but only time you see "red" is during your MENESTRATION PERIODS
how the hell you think your gonna DISS THESE RAP SHEETS
when everything you SPIT BE PAST WEAK
your so wack you couldnt make lyrics look "phat" writting a verse on MISSY'S ASS CHEEKS
you THIRST COCKS and i live on a WORST BLOCK
ill beat your ass so fast youll be in the hospital talkin bout take the FIRST SHOT
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wak structure...
decent punches...
decent personals...
flow/off but good...
style/yea had some style...
Injoyment/ok...
overall verse quality...7/10...7 out of 10 score ratio...
peace...