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Originally posted by Tirhc
explain ur votes....Or it will be deleted.....anyhow explain like this.
Ok this is what i thought.
penskillz: structure VERY VERY VERY long...and to much to read.....Punches:came good and tough keep them coming...Personals:welll well well. same as the punches but there could be better ways u can express them.complex was bad. so was the flow.
Overall percentage: 5/10
88shots:Stucture^same as i said the other...To much to read hurts my eyes...narrow it down...U both lose on this...next thing punches were ill...but not enough....Personals came weak...u need to make ur structures smaller and the personals and punches will be easy to catch. Flow was off a little bit...
overall percentage: 4.5/10
u see the overalls...u do the math
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