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Originally posted by Dimez
Penskills
The longevity of your words beckons a "short-coming" like brevity/
exceptionally, I make "readers laugh" like "stand up comedy"/
because I insult you phonically/
like I got "chris farley standin next to me", and I be/
Good vocabulary but bad structure
usin his punchlines to "keel you over" like "flipping ships"/
"rippin your face off", illustrates how "impossible this mission is"/
attrition hits, equal detrimental blasts like fists/
you couldn't give me "half your mind"/ because then I'd have "all of it"/ Some good metaz.. but u might wanna re-word
initiate keratectomies on the readers of this ish/
then they'd be "seein darkness", exactly the color that my soul is/
Sounds like a poem lol
I'm in control now/
like tyranny I take your typographical script/
and formulate hypothetical myths/
about how your ass got ripped/
some proclaim "a gay man did it!"/
but how could that be when you "don't get out" like "life convicts"/
Get Rid of the /< - - ppl here dont like em lol
for one you aint secular or religious, possibly promiscuous, and yeah, your rhymes "aint tight" like a "virgin" is!/
so it could have been a battle gone wrong against "Penskills"/
I "lit your expression" up like "carvings in a pumpkins"/
committed seven counts of "prostate stabbin", like "knockin out your emissions"/
killin people by the "numbers in your house", like "long division"/
Umm.... 1st to 7 voteS? around here its 5 lol
with "precision like dentists", I "drill you for the crown"/
astound onlookers when they realize "that you're going down"/
"propounded like applications", your crew will replace you with "lyrical intoxication"/
drunken defeated ya, repleted and conceded ya/
"wasted you like oxygen", you're lucky to be "breathin", brah!/
Wow.. u need some work.. and r u a girl or guy? lol
80Shots
you sound real brainy-but bitch i wonder do you give brain?//
coz as soft as your lyrics are-my torturous flow is insane//
So much easier to read.. but get rid of the //<- -
took 1 look at my school book an was frozen straight shook//
penskills rather nofrills, baby help me, teach this nigga how 2cook//
Wack... lol wtf?
bitches like you watse time-trying to rhyme, girl you'll neva shine//
lyrics sound so shitty an elementary, sounds like u cant rhyme or u blind//
LMAOOO nice last line
is it an offence 2 mention tha big wart in your soul//
this will explain the lack of talent in yo skit, now bitch reveal that mole//
LMAOOOOOOo... wow funny
show everybody yo real beauty,h.i.v- and a flow like mace//
chomp chomp-feeding yo fat ass stomach-nofrills what i tel ya bout chomping wit out saying grace//
That dont rhyme to me
feeling down so low-everybody see's u as a waste of space//
like the ugly duckling in the pond, u aint earned yo place//
LMAO... hillarious.. i like humor
Gods mistake, you fucked up, how long b4 u break//
i eat yo wack lyrics breakfast-and wipe the crumbz of my plate//
Dont ever diss God like that... seriously
you fake-1 of them gothic bitches who slit thier wrist//
aint no mercy-shit trick-ready 4 me to slit yo lip//
Nice stereotype
Although 80shots had good structure... penskills had good vocab and both of yall had humor...
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