this was a nice little nursery rhyme...but names aren't what you use in poetry....gives too much solid detail...you need to be a lil more eccentric and not as precise....ya dig...but wordplay was simple...as well as the rhyme scheme....

but was coo none the less....


igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S