...Could've Done Better...
...Make The Chorus Shorter...
...Ya Verse Lacked Complexity And Flow...
...Sloppy Wording Was Evident With...
"I found it surprising, She only slept with just 3 dudes
Two not even naked, and only one in the Nude.."
...You Lacked Wordplay And Metaphors As Well...
...Stay Elevatin'...
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